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You sat next to Feli on the sofa in the very beautifully decorated lounge. The lounge was large with cream walls and a pale chocolate brown carpet. The sofas were cream with black cushions. Even the lounge had a chandelier. You couldn't help but wonder if every room had a chandelier. You noticed a bright red chair in the corner of the room with a golden cushion. You saw two men, one with blonde hair and blue eyes, the other with short black hair and dark brown eyes, and both men were wearing grey formal suits. They looked oddly familiar to you for some reason.

"___________, this is Ludwig Weillschmidt, and this is Kiku Honda." Feli said cheerily. Kiku bowed his head at you, with Ludwig giving you a stern handshake.

"I believe we have met you before, __________; Kiku and I were exchange students to your school for the 10th grade." Ludwig said, letting go of your hand. You suddenly remember how you were on the welcome committee, and you had to show them around the school for the first two periods.

"Oh! I remember you two now! You two were always with Feli when he was being bullied." You piped, smiling. You heard a small ahem from behind you.

"I'd like it if you didn't flirt when you're dating my cousin, idiota." Ah-lee-che snarled. You turned your head to her and glared at her darkly.

"Can you please try to be nice to her, cugina?" Feli asked tiredly, looking at Ah-lee-che pleadingly.

"Well why should I Feliciano?! This is not her home; you are not her property! She had no right being here!" Ah-lee-che snapped, pointing at you suddenly.

"Aww, is ikkle Alice jealous of Feli's new girlfriend then? Is ikkle Alice scared that Feli doesn't like her anymore?" You asked tauntingly.

"I told you, it's Ah-LEE-che!" Ah-lee-che yelled, cheeks going bright red. You smirked as you saw Ah-lee-che throw a tantrum. You just didn't like her at all. You felt like you could slap her any moment. Kiku and Ludwig looked at Feli.

"Hehe, Kiku, Ludwig, can you just wait in the study please?" Feli asked them. They left without question. Ah-lee-che glared at you darkly.

"_____________, will you please, please, pretty please be nice to my cugina?" Feli begged you, taking your hand into his. You blushed suddenly and looked onto the floor.

"Well, I guess I can; as long as she doesn't act like such a spoilt brat." You added acidly. Ah-lee-che looked as if she wanted to throttle you.

"Well you shouldn't be such a puttana then!" Ah-lee-che hissed at you. Feli looked mortified at her.

"Cugina Alice, come ti permetti!" Feli exclaimed furiously. Ah-lee-che looked taken aback. Then she glared at Feli darkly.

"Fine then, I understand. You'll regret ever being with this stupid merda. If you think this bitch loves you then you can think again! She's a no good manipulative COW!! VAFFANCULO PUTTANA!!" Ah-lee-che screamed at you. She went to slap you in the face, but Feli grabbed her arm before she could hit you. She looked at him with wide eyes. Feli looked at her with dark eyes blazing with fury. You saw Ah-lee-che cower in fear a little as he towered over her darkly. You were actually quite scared of Feli at that moment.

"Andare a dormine… Adesso..." Feli added in a harsh whisper. Ah-lee-che looked at him pleadingly, tears swelling up in her eyes. But then she neatly marched out of the room. Feli rubbed his eyes tiredly.

"Hehe, sorry about that, _____________, Alice and I are usually inseparable. I guess she's gotten too attached to me." Feli said sheepishly. You smiled at Feli and hugged him.

"It's OK. But what did she say that made you flip?" You asked. Feli laughed nervously.

"Err, you don't want to know. But it is getting late. I think you should go to bed." Feli said. You looked at the clock and saw that it was nearly eleven o'clock. Feli kissed you on the lips, twirling a strand of your hair around his finger again. You kissed him back, closing your eyes. You were thrilled that you and Feli were going out, and you could care about stupid little Ah-lee-che. You couldn't stand her even if Feli did ask you to be nice to her.

Feli led you up the stairs and took you to the room where you first woke up.

"Feli, how many guestrooms do you have? This room must be the best guestroom in the house." You asked, looking around the room again. Feli blushed heavily and shuffled his feet.

"Well, err; this is my mama's room." Feli said sheepishly. You felt like banging your head against the wall for being so insensitive. It was bad enough seeing Roma nearly break down in tears, and that you almost used Feli's handmade face cloth by his mom, but now you called her room the guestroom.

"Oh! I'm so sorry Feli! I didn't know that this was Francesca's room-" You gabbled.

"It' OK __- Wait, how do you know mama's name?" Feli asked you curiously. You briefly told him how you saw the photo of her and Lovino, and how Roma told you about her when Feli went out to do whatever he did to that man.

"Veh, I remember a little bit of how Grandpa Roma was really upset about mama. Lovino thinks that it was my fault why she died. I think that's why he hates me so much to be honest." Feli said miserably, looking down onto the floor. You gave Feli a hug that almost threw him off guard, but he hugged you back tightly.

"He doesn't hate you. Maybe he thinks that because she died and you lived was because they didn't try." You suggested, looking at Feli. Feli shrug his shoulders at you, but he did smile at you a bit.

"Grazie, _____________, you always know how to cheer me up." Feli said, kissing your forehead lightly. He bid you goodnight and walked out of the room, but he did blow you a kiss before he left. You blew him a kiss too, but he pretended to catch it and put his hand over his heart romantically.


Fem!Italy's POV

Alice was absolutely furious. That no good little puttana _____________ had changed her sweet little Feli for the worse. He had never yelled at Alice before in her life, in their entire lives. She was expecting him to back away to get Ludwig to help her restrain. But instead he switched his happy mood to his dark mood, on her. She felt as if she was on the verge of tears she was that angry.

"Stupid puttana, thinking she can steal my cugino from me. I'll make her pay for this." Alice snarled to herself.

'I'll make her life a living hell.' Alice thought to herself. She paced around her baby blue and cream bedroom, trying to think of a way to get rid of that little puttana for good. She could drive her away slowly; but then again,_____________ looked as if she wouldn't take no for an answer. She could kill her, it would be quicker; but then Alice would be stuck with cleaning up the evidence. But first, she wanted to apologize to her cugino Feli for being so out of order. Alice walked out of the room and made her way to Zia Francesca's room. She knew that Feli would be in either there, the lounge with Ludwig and Kiku, or his own room. She reached Zia's room and opened the door.

"Feliciano~ are you in here? I just wanted… to…" Alice stopped dead when she saw _____________ wearing Francesca's favourite nightgown, on FRANCESCA'S bed, in FRANCESCA'S room. _____________ stared at Alice with wide and fearful eyes.

Feliciano wasn't the only one with a dark side.
Shit's going dddooooooowwwwwnn

A quick translation of the Italian which I totally did not use Google translater for:

Puttana = bitch
Cugino/a = cousin ("a" is feminine.)
Come ti permetti = How dare you
Vaffanculo puttana = fuck you bitch
Andare a dormine... Adesso... = Bedtime... now...
Zia = aunt
Merda = shit

Chapter 1 - [link]
Chapter 2 - [link]
Chapter 3 - [link]
Chapter 4 - [link]
Chapter 5 - [link]
Chapter 6 - [link]
Chapter 7 - Here!
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ILoveReadingFanFics Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015
More please!
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NoelVermillion987 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
Oh snap! She GONNA kill meh!
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Ame-Chan-love Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
omg that was amazingggg
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adventuretimer101 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
Continue please!!!


Or I will show you MY dark side!!!!

Thank you!! *smiles sweetly and skips away*
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TheWhaleDreamer Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
why does she hate reader so much?
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TiffanyVargas Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I totaly love this,it's epic!! ~




Italy (Globe Dance) [V2] 
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JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014   General Artist
Me: Non si scherza con me Alice (translation: do not mess with me alice)v
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HetaNyotalia Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
..........Is there going to be more.......pleaseeeeeeeeee be more, I don't like it to end here...............I will be reading this over again.....so.........MORE PLEASE
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NekoSaiYan Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I absolutely love this series! Will there be more? Hopefully soon?
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Lilsophie123 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
Can you please make more? :3
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AmestrisBlog Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
are you going to write more?
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LittleMissSakura Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ahahaha....
ahahahaha.....
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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i lost all my files so its going to take forever but yes I am c:
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AmestrisBlog Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you I can't wait to read it
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BokuMexico-Vee Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Me encanto! I'm on the edge of my seat! :boing:
:iconmafiaitalyplz: Mafia Italy might be up on my top 10 fave character list now! So good!!
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Incedia8 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student
Holy crappola, Wow...that...was...just...wow O.O
Please continue, it was amazing :iconfangirlingplz:
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ask-the-fem-Finland Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
Wow your a very good writer~!
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:iconlittlemisssakura:
LittleMissSakura Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
asdertyhun aaaa thank you Finny! ^^
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myheartwillbreak Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Writer
Dat bitch is going DOOOOOWWWN!
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stupidbread Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
*pulls out knife* BITCH DON'T TOUCH ME! D8
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AshuriKakko1 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012
Oh fuck im so dead XD

Is there going to be more may I ask? :3
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DawnFlash Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Has this not been continued? D:
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DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh freaking snap i'm gonna be murdered XD
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ThePrussianFlag Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Gahh!! Make more
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Kiana-AJ Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I used to like Fem!Italy but now... I see how it is *turns in a katana (with flying mint bunny as weapon mister) blade is close to Alice face* WHO'S THE BEOCH NOW??!! and please more!
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BrewehKazune Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Are you still continuing this...? :3
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BlackAngelLight Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
MORE!
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sakunae Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*reaches end of chapter* Oh shi...ttake mushrooms.
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:iconlittlemisssakura:
LittleMissSakura Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
mmmm.... never had shittake mushrooms . w .
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sakunae Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
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navyangel555 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
epic~! :iconepicfaceplz:
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LittleMissSakura Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
SO IS YOUR ICON
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navyangel555 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^^:iconthankyouplz:
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iamrosu Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Yay it's updated! :iconyayitalyplz: ;u; I love this reader insert so much~
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LittleMissSakura Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
D'aww why thank you :iconfeliplz:
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
I still get a kick while reading this now that Female Italy is in this because I sort of look like her and then Veneciano's human name is Feliciano and mine is Felicia, which is what his female self is sometimes called I've heard. It's like there is two mes~

Wicked story^^ you are doing an awesome job~
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LittleMissSakura Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I've seen a lot of people use Felicia or Valentina for Fem!Italy. But I did some research and Himaruya Hidekazu said he liked the name Alice for Fem!Italy ((although its not her official name w )), so I used Alice instead :3
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
lol yeah. I see Alice as more of Fem!England's name
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:iconlittlemisssakura:
LittleMissSakura Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think he said that he liked Alice or Rosa for Fem!England, but Rosa has a more exotic tone to it, if that makes sense ^^;
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
It does...hmm Rosa I like that for 2P Fem!England lol ^^'
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HetaliaAmericaGirl Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist
MOAR~! This is a really good story~! But I really want to strangle Alice right now..... xD
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LittleMissSakura Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't strangle Alice ; A ;
She's nicer later on... I promise... hehehe
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SkyWarriorKirby Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I swear I just want to kill Fem!Italy slowly and violently if she keeps this up. I just want to grab her little neck and choke her with all my strength and MMF. I seriously want her to die. I hate how Himaruya created her ;=;
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LittleMissSakura Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD well, you'll start to like her... eventually >:3
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SkyWarriorKirby Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm let me think about that, NOPE.
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murasaki5811 Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
uh-oh..... it looks like a cat fight coming up.....
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:iconlittlemisssakura:
LittleMissSakura Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nah... let's call it a ... creative discussion
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SomeHetalian Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student Writer
i LOVE THIS STORYYY O . P
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LittleMissSakura Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WELL I LOVE YOU!!!!
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Raediocake Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HOLY....ROMAN...EMPIRE. Need. More. :I
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LittleMissSakura Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WOULD YOU LIKE FRIES WITH YOUR NEXT CHAPTER?
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